Re: Hurt Peter Thread

[Larissa]

WE HAVE 4 APPROACHES THAT WE'VE LEARNT XD BEHAVIOURIST, BILOGICAL, PSYCHODYNAMIC AND COGNITIVE :') THERE IS A LOT BUT ONCE YOU'VE SEEN IT ONCE, A LOT CAN BE REMEMBERED EASILY XD IT'S WHEN THEY GET PICKY AND NEED A CERTAIN WORD TO GIVE YOU A MARK THAT KILLS ME -.-

[Danielle]

IT'S THE NUMBERS IN THE STUDIES AND THEORIES. THE RESULTS, AND THE AMOUNT OF PARTICIPANTS ETC.
I CAN'T DO IITTTT.
I'M FREAKING OUT OVER BIOLOGY. THAT SHIT MIGHT AS WELL JUST AUTOMATICALLY FAIL ME.

[Larissa]

ALL I'VE HEARD ABOUT BIOLOGY IS THAT YOU HAVE TEST AFTER TEST AFTER TEST. O_____________O YOU HAVE MORE WILL-POWER THAN ME XD

[Danielle]

WE DO. AFTER EVERY UNIT WE HAVE THIS MOCK TEST. I JUST WANT TO KILL BIOLOGY FOREVER.
I HATE IT ;_;

[monnie44]

HE'S SLEEP DEPRIVED AND INSANE AND HE GOES TO BUY SOME DRUGS AND THE GUY HE BUYS DRUGS FROM INFORMS BIG EDDIE HE'S HERE. THEY FIND HIM SOMEWHERE AND BEAT HIM SHITLESS AND DRAG HIM TO SOME WATER AND LEAVE HIM TO DROWN AND HE'S KINDA HAPPY AND THEN HE SEES OLIVIA STANDING OVER HIM JUST AS HE DIES AND HE REALIZES HE DOESN'T QUITE WANT TO DIE ANYMORE.

WHAT. HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO OUR PETER? HOW CAN YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF?

Omg girl I don't care if you finish this or not you are emailing me a copy at some point okay? I need this in my life!

AND I'D LOVE TO SEE PETER GO CRAZY. I KNOW I GO ON ABOUT THIS A LOT, BUT IF HE STARTED HALLUCINATING LITTLE!PETER OR HIS DEAD MOTHER, AND THEY WERE TELLING HIM HE WAS USELESS, HE DOESN'T DESERVE TO LIVE, AND HOW MANY MORE PEOPLE HAVE TO DIE BEFORE PETER JUST KILLS HIMSELF? I THINK HE'D JUST CRACK. I HAVE THIS IMAGE OF OLIVIA TRYING TO BRIEF HIM AND WALTER ON A CASE BUT PETER CAN'T FOCUS BECAUSE HE SEES HIS MOTHER SAT NEXT TO HIM TELLING HIM SHE KILLED HERSELF BECAUSE SHE COULD NEVER LOVE PETER AS MUCH AS SHE LOVED HER SON.

HOLY SHIT PROMISE ME YOU ARE WRITING THIS. I NEED THIS SCENE. I CAN SEE IT IN MY MIND NOW - HIS FACE, WITH THIS LITTLE FROWN, SITTING TOTALLY STILL, STARING AT A SPOT JUST PAST OLIVIA'S HEAD AND HE JUST CAN'T TAKE ANYTHING IN AND HE'S FREAKING OUT SO MUCH HE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. ONE OF THEM WOULD NOTICE, TOO, AND HE'D HAVE TO LIE ABOUT IT. :'( UGH WHAT IF IT DROVE HIM TO SUICIDE, OR NEAR SUICIDE, AND HE ALMOST SHOOTS HIMSELF IN THE HEAD OR HE WINDS HIMSELF UP IN HOSPITAL AND HE'S STRAPPED TO THE BED ON SUICIDE WATCH BECAUSE HE TRIED TO GET HIMSELF KILLED DURING A CONFRONTATION WITH A SUSPECT IN FRONT OF BROYLES AND OLIVIA AND ALL THESE RANDOM FBI AGENTS? I NEED A SUICIDAL PETER FIC OH MY GOD.

THERE WAS ONE BEAUTIFUL ONE AT FF.NET ABOUT HIM SHOOTING HIMSELF TO END THE WAR AND THE SAD THING IS I BELIEVE HE WOULD IF HE THOUGHT IT WAS THE ONLY WAY TO FIX EVERYTHING.

I WANT PETER TO BE AN EMOTIONAL MESS 'CAUSE NO ONE EVER TELLS HIM THE TRUTH OR GIVES HIM ANSWERS, SO HE SHOUTS THE "WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO ME?" LINE AT SEPTEMBER. I REALLY WANT SPETEMBER TO TELL HIM HE HAS TO DIE SO WE CAN SEE PETER'S HEART BROKEN FACE! I THINK IT'D BE GREAT IF PETER'S ON THE VERGE OF A BREAK DOWN AND THEN HE SAYS "WHAT ABOUT THE OTHERS? WILL THEY DIE?" AND THE OBSERVER'S ALL "NO. ONLY YOU HAVE TO DIE TO RETORE BALANCE, THE OTHERS CAN BE AVOIDED." SO PETER'S A MESS BUT RELIEVED AT THE SAME TIME, THEN PETER CAN BE LIKE "CAN YOU PROTECT THEM FOR ME?" AND SEPTEMBER'S ALL CONFUSED ABOUT HUMAN EMOTIONS. THEN THEY HEAR OLIVIA PULL UP AND SEPTEMBER DOESN'T WANT THEM TO CHASE HIM, SO HE SHOOTS PETER KNOWING IT WILL SLOW OLIVIA DOWN AND HE LEAVES.

This must happen! I want him to get some sort of death sentence from September in answer to that question, whether it is to do with the machine or if he has been feeling unwell and the Observer confirms that yes, he is going to die and that he wasn't ever supposed to have gone back to the other side. And after he wakes up from the shooting, the symptoms of his disease slowly begin to kick in over the next few episodes, but Peter keeps it to himself because he can't cope with the upset Walter and he feels like he'll be guilting Olivia into forgiving him and he just can't.

[overthere]

How should that teaser scene from the Firefly promo go down?

MMMMM. I HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT THIS WAY MORE THAN A NORMAL PERSON SHOULD. SRSLY.

WELL WHEN THE OBSERVER SHOOTS HIM AND SUCH, AND HE'S ALL UNCONSCIOUS, I WANT OLIVIA TO FLIP OUT. LIKE SHE CRYS AND CRYS UNTIL SHE HAS NO MORE TEARS. AND THEN SHE FEELS LIKE CRAP FOR TELLING HIM OFF AT THE END OF MARIONETTE. SHE'S ALL, "PETER PLEASE. YOU CAN'T DIE. PETER, IM SORRY. PLEASE. COME BACK." OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT. I DON'T KNOW. I JUST WANT HER TO FREAK.

ALSO, I REALLY WANT PETER TO HAVE A MAJOR BREAKDOWN BEFORE HE GETS SHOT. LIKE HE LOCKS HIMSELF IN HIS ROOM AND HE BEATS HIMSELF UP FOR THE WHOLE THING WITH.. YOU KNOW. ALTER LADY. I DON'T WANNA SAY HER NAME THOUGH. ANYWAY, MAYBE HE LIKE GETS DRUNK IN A BAR ONE NIGHT BECAUSE HE'S STILL ALL SAD THEN HE GETS INTO A BAR FIGHT OR SOMETHING. IDK. I JUST WOULD LOVE THAT.

I DON'T KNOW IF SOMEBODY HAS ALREADY SAID THIS BECAUSE I HAVEN'T HAD MUCH TIME TO LOOK THROUGH ALL THE POSTS. BUT YEAH, HE'S MINE. AND I HOPE IT ACTUALLY POSTS THIS TIME XD

[overthere]

WHOOPS. I MEANT TO SAY "HERE'S MINE" INSTEAD OF "HE'S MINE"... I GUESS MY MIND JUST WENT TO THAT INSTEAD. TROLOLOLOL.

HE'S MINE. XD

[Larissa]

WHAT. HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO OUR PETER? HOW CAN YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF?

Omg girl I don't care if you finish this or not you are emailing me a copy at some point okay? I need this in my life!

LOLOLOL DANI ALWAYS KILLS PETER XD

HOLY SHIT PROMISE ME YOU ARE WRITING THIS. I NEED THIS SCENE. I CAN SEE IT IN MY MIND NOW - HIS FACE, WITH THIS LITTLE FROWN, SITTING TOTALLY STILL, STARING AT A SPOT JUST PAST OLIVIA'S HEAD AND HE JUST CAN'T TAKE ANYTHING IN AND HE'S FREAKING OUT SO MUCH HE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. ONE OF THEM WOULD NOTICE, TOO, AND HE'D HAVE TO LIE ABOUT IT. :'( UGH WHAT IF IT DROVE HIM TO SUICIDE, OR NEAR SUICIDE, AND HE ALMOST SHOOTS HIMSELF IN THE HEAD OR HE WINDS HIMSELF UP IN HOSPITAL AND HE'S STRAPPED TO THE BED ON SUICIDE WATCH BECAUSE HE TRIED TO GET HIMSELF KILLED DURING A CONFRONTATION WITH A SUSPECT IN FRONT OF BROYLES AND OLIVIA AND ALL THESE RANDOM FBI AGENTS? I NEED A SUICIDAL PETER FIC OH MY GOD.

I HAVE THIS SCENE FOR IT IN MY HEAD WHERE THERE'S A QUIET CONVERSATION GOING ON, BUT PETER CAN HEAR HIS MUM TAUNTING AND INSULTING HIM SO HE JUST SNAPS, STANDS UP AND SCREAMS "SHUT UP! ALL OF YOU JUST SHUT UP!" AND EVERYONE IN THE LAB STARES AT HIM AND THEY REALIZE HE'S LOST IT. HE'D BE STOOD THERE WITH HIS IRREGULAR BREATHING, TEARY, CONFUSED EYES, AND PULLING AT HIS HAIR HOPING TH EPAIN REMINDS HIM OF WHAT'S REAL <3
I don't write fic because I have no talent xD I just come up with lots of scenarios that never get put down xD I think Dani said she might try to write it though xD

THERE WAS ONE BEAUTIFUL ONE AT FF.NET ABOUT HIM SHOOTING HIMSELF TO END THE WAR AND THE SAD THING IS I BELIEVE HE WOULD IF HE THOUGHT IT WAS THE ONLY WAY TO FIX EVERYTHING.

ROFL If it was by "IWasHereMomentsAGo', that's Dani xD

This must happen! I want him to get some sort of death sentence from September in answer to that question, whether it is to do with the machine or if he has been feeling unwell and the Observer confirms that yes, he is going to die and that he wasn't ever supposed to have gone back to the other side. And after he wakes up from the shooting, the symptoms of his disease slowly begin to kick in over the next few episodes, but Peter keeps it to himself because he can't cope with the upset Walter and he feels like he'll be guilting Olivia into forgiving him and he just can't.

OMG ASDFGHJKLSDFGHJK YES. LIKE YOUR FICS. I'LL LOVE IT SO MUCH IF HE KNOWS AND HE JUST DOESN'T TELL THEM.

[Larissa]

WHOOPS. I MEANT TO SAY "HERE'S MINE" INSTEAD OF "HE'S MINE".

DID YOU REALLY?!?! XD XD

[overthere]

TROLOLOL. YES. I DID. BUT "HE'S MINE" IS WAYY BETTER.

[monnie44]

I HAVE THIS SCENE FOR IT IN MY HEAD WHERE THERE'S A QUIET CONVERSATION GOING ON, BUT PETER CAN HEAR HIS MUM TAUNTING AND INSULTING HIM SO HE JUST SNAPS, STANDS UP AND SCREAMS "SHUT UP! ALL OF YOU JUST SHUT UP!" AND EVERYONE IN THE LAB STARES AT HIM AND THEY REALIZE HE'S LOST IT. HE'D BE STOOD THERE WITH HIS IRREGULAR BREATHING, TEARY, CONFUSED EYES, AND PULLING AT HIS HAIR HOPING TH EPAIN REMINDS HIM OF WHAT'S REAL <3
I don't write fic because I have no talent xD I just come up with lots of scenarios that never get put down xD I think Dani said she might try to write it though xD

DON'T SAY THAT I NEED IT. Dani better write it then! I will start harassing her!

Also I find it hard to believe you can come up with such wonderful scenarios and yet not have good enough writing talent to produce some fics. Call me sceptical bb. You should try your hand at it sometime - even something short and drabble-like. You have got two important ingredients down to pat already; you damn well get Peter's character (often the biggest downfall in fanfic) and you can generate compelling scenarios. The next thing to do is to put it into story format. You're halfway there already. Just a thought.

TROLOLOL. YES. I DID. BUT "HE'S MINE" IS WAYY BETTER.

Yeah ... that was a total accident.

WELL WHEN THE OBSERVER SHOOTS HIM AND SUCH, AND HE'S ALL UNCONSCIOUS, I WANT OLIVIA TO FLIP OUT. LIKE SHE CRYS AND CRYS UNTIL SHE HAS NO MORE TEARS. AND THEN SHE FEELS LIKE CRAP FOR TELLING HIM OFF AT THE END OF MARIONETTE. SHE'S ALL, "PETER PLEASE. YOU CAN'T DIE. PETER, IM SORRY. PLEASE. COME BACK." OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT. I DON'T KNOW. I JUST WANT HER TO FREAK.

Do you know what? I would almost be on board with this scenario (because I'd love her to freak) but ever since that stupid (not really, but on Olivia's part yah) scene in Brown Betty where Peter passes out and Olivia just pats his cheek twice and says "Peter. .... Peter" and then GIVES UP, PRESUMING HIM DEAD, I have this picture in my mind of how useless Olivia would be if it was up to her to bring him around. I mean ... she'd probably just sit there LOOKING at him, instead of doing anything to fucking wake him up. There's this fantastic trick with unconscious people, where if you actively try and get them to wake up, SOMETIMES IT WORKS. /rant

I don't know what my point was there.

Anyway.

ALSO, I REALLY WANT PETER TO HAVE A MAJOR BREAKDOWN BEFORE HE GETS SHOT. LIKE HE LOCKS HIMSELF IN HIS ROOM AND HE BEATS HIMSELF UP FOR THE WHOLE THING WITH.. YOU KNOW. ALTER LADY. I DON'T WANNA SAY HER NAME THOUGH. ANYWAY, MAYBE HE LIKE GETS DRUNK IN A BAR ONE NIGHT BECAUSE HE'S STILL ALL SAD THEN HE GETS INTO A BAR FIGHT OR SOMETHING. IDK. I JUST WOULD LOVE THAT.

CAN YOU WRITE THIS PLEASE? LIKE A PARALLEL SCENE WHERE PETER'S CRYING INTO HIS MIT SHIRT LIKE A LITTLE BITCH TO MATCH OLIVIA'S BREAKDOWN IN MARIONETTE. GOD KNOWS THE WRITERS WON'T TOUCH IT - MEN AREN'T ALLOWED TO CRY ON TV, MUCH LESS IS PETTER ALLOWED TO SHOW ACTUAL, GRITTY GRIEF, ESPECIALLY WHEN HE HASN'T BEEN HURT QUITE AS MUCH AS OLIVIA.

[Larissa]

Dani better write it then! I will start harassing her!

Harassing her does actually tend to work, so GO AT HER! :'D

Also I find it hard to believe you can come up with such wonderful scenarios and yet not have good enough writing talent to produce some fics. Call me sceptical bb. You should try your hand at it sometime - even something short and drabble-like. You have got two important ingredients down to pat already; you damn well get Peter's character (often the biggest downfall in fanfic) and you can generate compelling scenarios. The next thing to do is to put it into story format. You're halfway there already. Just a thought.

It's the 'putting it in story format' where I stumble :') I have no confidence when it comes to that and, I know from experience, I always hate what I write :/

Do you know what? I would almost be on board with this scenario (because I'd love her to freak) but ever since that stupid (not really, but on Olivia's part yah) scene in Brown Betty where Peter passes out and Olivia just pats his cheek twice and says "Peter. .... Peter" and then GIVES UP, PRESUMING HIM DEAD, I have this picture in my mind of how useless Olivia would be if it was up to her to bring him around. I mean ... she'd probably just sit there LOOKING at him, instead of doing anything to fucking wake him up. There's this fantastic trick with unconscious people, where if you actively try and get them to wake up, SOMETIMES IT WORKS. /rant

OMG ROFL XD XD
THIS IS THE SINGLE MOST AMAZING POST IN THE HISTORY OF EVER. :'D

[overthere]

[quote="monnie44"]

ALSO, I REALLY WANT PETER TO HAVE A MAJOR BREAKDOWN BEFORE HE GETS SHOT. LIKE HE LOCKS HIMSELF IN HIS ROOM AND HE BEATS HIMSELF UP FOR THE WHOLE THING WITH.. YOU KNOW. ALTER LADY. I DON'T WANNA SAY HER NAME THOUGH. ANYWAY, MAYBE HE LIKE GETS DRUNK IN A BAR ONE NIGHT BECAUSE HE'S STILL ALL SAD THEN HE GETS INTO A BAR FIGHT OR SOMETHING. IDK. I JUST WOULD LOVE THAT.

CAN YOU WRITE THIS PLEASE? LIKE A PARALLEL SCENE WHERE PETER'S CRYING INTO HIS MIT SHIRT LIKE A LITTLE BITCH TO MATCH OLIVIA'S BREAKDOWN IN MARIONETTE. GOD KNOWS THE WRITERS WON'T TOUCH IT - MEN AREN'T ALLOWED TO CRY ON TV, MUCH LESS IS PETTER ALLOWED TO SHOW ACTUAL, GRITTY GRIEF, ESPECIALLY WHEN HE HASN'T BEEN HURT QUITE AS MUCH AS OLIVIA.

CAN I WRITE THAT? LOL, I WOULD. IF I HAD TALENT.

[Larissa]

CAN I WRITE THAT? LOL, I WOULD. IF I HAD TALENT.

WE SHARE THE EXACT SAME ATTITUDE XD XD

[overthere]

CAN I WRITE THAT? LOL, I WOULD. IF I HAD TALENT.

WE SHARE THE EXACT SAME ATTITUDE XD XD

WOOT WOOT. *HIGH GIVE* WE WHO CAN'T WRITE, WE GOTTA STICK TOGETHER. WE SHOULD MAKE A CLUB.

[Larissa]

TEAM "WE CAN'T WRITE TO SAVE OUR LIVES!" XD

[Danielle]

HAIHAIHAI.

IT WASN'T ME WHO WROTE THE ONE ABOUT HIM SHOOTING HIMSELF, I READ THAT AND CRIED LIKE A HORSE WHO'S LAYING AN EGG AND THEN EATING THE EGG. I CAN'T REMEMBER WHO IT WAS BY THOUGH.
I'M GONNA START CHAPTER 3 OF THE DREAM ONE ON THURSDAY AND I'LL START THE INSANE ONE THEN TOO CAUSE YOUR MIND IS BEAUTIFUL, LARISSA. I'D DO IT WEDNESDAY NIGHT BUT FUCKING LAW MOCK ON THURSDAY.

I AGREE, OLIVIA WOULD BE SHIT IN TRYING TO BRING PETER ROUND. SHE'D JUST KINDA SIT, AND STARE. WE'D GET CLOSE UPS OF HER ANGSTY TEARY EYES AND PETER BLEEDING OUT WOULD GET IGNORED.
I CAN JUST IMAGINE PETER GETTING SHOT AND HE'S BARELY CONSCIOUS AND DYING AND THE CAMERA DOES. NOT. LEAVE OLIVIA XD

I WANT YOU BOTH TO TRYYYYY WRITE THOUGH CAUSE YOU'RE AWESOMMMMMEEEEE. XD

HNNNNNNG INSANE PETER <3333333 I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIM NOT EVEN REALIZING HE'S LOST HIS MIND UNTIL IT'S TOO LATE FOR HIM TO CARE.

[Larissa]

HAIHAIHAI.

IT WASN'T ME WHO WROTE THE ONE ABOUT HIM SHOOTING HIMSELF, I READ THAT AND CRIED LIKE A HORSE WHO'S LAYING AN EGG AND THEN EATING THE EGG. I CAN'T REMEMBER WHO IT WAS BY THOUGH.
I'M GONNA START CHAPTER 3 OF THE DREAM ONE ON THURSDAY AND I'LL START THE INSANE ONE THEN TOO CAUSE YOUR MIND IS BEAUTIFUL, LARISSA. I'D DO IT WEDNESDAY NIGHT BUT FUCKING LAW MOCK ON THURSDAY.

I AGREE, OLIVIA WOULD BE SHIT IN TRYING TO BRING PETER ROUND. SHE'D JUST KINDA SIT, AND STARE. WE'D GET CLOSE UPS OF HER ANGSTY TEARY EYES AND PETER BLEEDING OUT WOULD GET IGNORED.
I CAN JUST IMAGINE PETER GETTING SHOT AND HE'S BARELY CONSCIOUS AND DYING AND THE CAMERA DOES. NOT. LEAVE OLIVIA XD

I WANT YOU BOTH TO TRYYYYY WRITE THOUGH CAUSE YOU'RE AWESOMMMMMEEEEE. XD

HNNNNNNG INSANE PETER <3333333 I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIM NOT EVEN REALIZING HE'S LOST HIS MIND UNTIL IT'S TOO LATE FOR HIM TO CARE.

WHATEVER OKAY! I KNOW YOU WROTE ONE WHERE HE SHOT HIMSELF, TOO XD I RE-READ IT THE OTHER DAY :'D

I MISREAD THAT AS YOU'D DO MY BRAIN ON THURSDAY NIGHT XD XD ROFL

THE CAMERA NEVER LEAVES OLIVIA'S FACE ANYWAY. IF THERE'S A REVELATION THAT SHOULD SHOCK THE WHOLE TEAM, THEY KEEP THE CAMERA ON OLIVIA LONGEST. AN EMOTIONAL SCENE BETWEEN PETER & OLIVIA - THE CAMERA IS ON HER THE ENTIRE TIME. IN MARIONATTE, THEY SHOULD HAVE SWITCHED BETWEEN WHO IT AS LOOKING AT, I'D HAVE LOVED TO HAVE SEEN PETER GRADUALLY BREAK DURING HER SPEECH, BUT NO, IT STAYED ON OLIVIA.

[Danielle]

OH YEAH I DID, I REMEMBER NOW. I COMPLETELY FORGOT THAT EXISTED.

I WILL DO YOUR BRAIN THURSDAY NIGHT IF YOU WANT.

WE WATCHED OLIVIA BREAK IN HER APARTMENT, IN LOOKING AT PETER, THE ARGUMENT THEY HAD OVER PROFILING, IN BARRETT'S GARDEN. IT'S LIKE THEY'RE DELIBERATELY MAKING US BLIND TO PETER

[Larissa]

LOLOLOLOL HOW COULD YOU FORGET?? IT WAS AWESOME <3 <3

OKILEE DOKILEE. I'M UP FOR THAT ;D ;D

HEY, WRITERS? IT DOESN'T MAKE US SYMPATHIZE WITH HER, IT JUST MAKES US MORE AND MORE SICK OF HER!

[Danielle]

I BLANKED IT OUT CAUSE IT WAS TOO HARD TO WRITE IN CHARACTER. I MIGHT TAKE DOWN THE ONE WHERE HE'S IN THE MACHINE CAUSE I THINK THAT ONE'S A BIT SHITTY.

I'LL PASS THE MESSAGE ON TO THE WRITERS WHEN I'M SCREWING YOUR BRAIN.

[Larissa]

EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS IN-CHARACTER AND AMAZING! XD

[Danielle]

I GET REALLY PARANOID ABOUT WRITING PETER OOC BECAUSE I KNOW IF SOMEONE TOLD ME I WAS DOING IT I'D JUST BE SO SAD XD

[Larissa]

NO ONE ELSE EVEN CARES ABOUT HIS CHARACTER XD DO THEY EVEN KNOW WHAT OOC IS FOR HIM? :'D

[Danielle]

NO AND I DON'T CARE WHAT THEY THINK BUT I CARE WHAT YOU GUYS THINK XD

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